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--Fireball-- by yvanquinet --Fireball-- by yvanquinet
Speed fanart of One piece : Ace (again)
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Critique by Ulquiorra275 Aug 16, 2010, 4:25:48 AM
Wow, this is an amazing piece. I love the comparison of the size of the fireball to the size of Ace; it really gives the comparisons in size a powerful image. (he's also amazingly detailed despite his size.) I love how he's noticeable even though he's practically standing in the fire.

I really like the balance between the strong brightness of the orange and yellow flames against the soft white and blue background! I also like how the white is used alternatively to give extreme brightness to the flames but also used to give the sky above a very light feel to it.. The lines that are used to define the fireball on the bottom left and right hand sides of it (closest to the flames that Ace is standing in), could be blended a bit better. It's a large fireball that is bound to make lots of light. Perhaps making the areas around the left and right bottom-ish middle edges of the piece itself a bit brighter because of the glow of the fireball.

Since the flames seem to be approaching the fireball on only one side (the side that is facing us). Maybe you could add more flames around the sides of the fireball (but keep them that lighter color to make sure the fireball holds it's original crisp feel to it.)

But i thought since the fire ball is a fireball, then it shouldn't have such a defined line against the background (unless it's currently expanding and the flames have no time to take their natural flame-like shape).

Overall, I am very impressed with your work on this. It shows you are a very advanced, capable artist.

I hope i wasn't too harsh.

Great Job! :)
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Sk8rock69 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
R.I.P Ace T_T
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mkarmageddon01 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2010
DAI ENKAI: ENTEI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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TheAncients Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010
u are probably the first one ive ever seen to make a picture of his ultimate technique: Tenkai.
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HopeMoon Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Aceeeee~ <33
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DTJames Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2010
Fantastic job!
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Redbowties Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2009
ace~
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Neko-Robin Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009
eheheh >:D
I was just thinking of drawing Ace and his huge fire ball and I saw this xD
Not bad! :D
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tempest1o1 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2008
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Love
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EmanuelBraga Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008  Professional General Artist
Ace Rules!!!


very cool!
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eZ-kun Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008
ACE!
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